Her sentence
We would hear their caravans approaching our neighborhood, the mewling of their sheep, the baaing of their goats, the jingle of the bells around their camels' necks.
-The Kite Runner
My sentence
I could hear the noise from the kitchen, the clanking of the pots and pans, the sizzling of the fries in the grease, the loud noise of the mixer mixing the cake batter.
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