Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Pink Flamingo Style Analysis Essay

Jennifer Price looks down upon the American’s tendency to go along with what everybody else is doing, such as the flamingo trend, and how we should be better than that. She shows what America should be based on.

Price crafts her writing in a way that really reveals what her view of American culture is. She talks about the five species of flamingos feeding “in flocks on algae and invertebrates”. It is as if she is saying that Americans are spineless; she is saying that we feed off of what other people are doing, that we have no backbone to stand up and choose for ourselves. She talks about other cultures using the flamingo to represent important things, such as the sun god Ra in Egypt, where as Americans used the flamingo for style. Price is saying that Americans feed off of each other. She is saying that we do not focus on what is important.

Price’s use of sentence structure really gets her point across. In the first paragraph, Price talks about the flamingo being a synonym for wealth and pizzazz. She uses ellipsis as if to show an unfinished thought. She puts the ellipsis there to make the reader stop and think about the reality of the statement. In the third paragraph, Price writes about the “sassy pinks” being “the hottest color of the decade”. She uses quotation marks around these two phrases as if to mock Americans for the importance we put on trends.

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